I have had Eshal sitting on my Easel wondering what it was that bothered me. I finally figured it out and after lightening her skin tones and opening her eyes more I am happy to say that I am pleased with the results. Now I have to wait for the painting to completely dry and then it can start it's long journey to Pakistan.
I sure hope that her family will like the painting.
Update - below is more information about this child portrait.